THE CANDY HOUSE

The Candy House
In a dark forest, where there was no light, was a candy house. Nobody lives there now, but it was first owned by a witch.
Why do I say it’s a candy house? Because everything was made of candies. The house’s wall was made of biscuits, the door was made of chocolate, the windows was made of jelly, and the balcony was made of lollipops! Inside the house, there was a really comfy bed. Next to it, was a box made of gold. What was inside it? Jewels! There were emeralds, pearls, diamonds, crystals, and moonstones.
I guess you really want to go there, right? But be careful or you will get lost.
By
Audrey
(妈妈注：妮妮昨天生病在家，除了看电视，就是一副无所事事的样子。于是，给她找点事情做，让她写个故事。她就直接写在了电脑里。也好，还省得我再敲一遍。

the word lollipop is a new one for me. i have never met such word in english.
Audrey can be my english teacher.
thanks .

青冈学的老式英文,lollipop, 棒棒糖,很通俗,很普遍的用法了.

妮妮生病了?好点了吗?

哈哈，不怪青冈。我也问了她emeralds是什么。

唉，我常常被她反问：这么简单的单词你都不知道吗？那你学英语都学什么去了？

That's why I'll keep  studying English .

我是学院英文，完全缺乏场景训练。所以，小孩子讲话，多数都听不懂的。   

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引用第4楼qinggang于2010-02-26 16:33发表的 回 2楼(山民) 的帖子 :
我是学院英文，完全缺乏场景训练。所以，小孩子讲话，多数都听不懂的。   

对于英文,我是彻底放弃了,反正也学不好.童话正在我身边学中文呢.她明年考大学要考中文,我对她的要求是考满分,不知道她能不能做到.今年童话的中文进步很大.
同时,我希望她考大学能考出状元成绩,99.75-99.95.期望很高,天天在童话耳边吹,把童话的耳朵都吹出老茧了.
今年童话考一门,她要考法律.

谢山民。妮妮还没完全好。医生说是有点伤风，没大碍。

英文我是学生，作文可以做理论顾问，这个故事如果有后续，在家长加以启发指导下会更令人期待。

老猫说的很是。我要把你的意思跟她转达，再试试启发她，看能不能有后续故事。   

一起期待。